How to Know When a Scene is Actually Finished

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Hi everyone, I hope you’re all well. Today I’m talking about scenes, and specifically, how to know a scene is ‘done’ or if it still needs work.

How to Know When a Scene is Actually Finished

I used to think a scene was finished when I’d got through the list of things that were supposed to happen in it. A character arrives, says the thing, then leaves. Job done, and on to the next scene. It took me such an embarrassingly long time to work out that this is not what finishing a scene means. It’s just ticking boxes.

How to Tell When the Scene is Finished
A scene is finished when something’s different between the start of it and the end of it. Not the plot, necessarily — the plot might not move at all in a given scene, and that’s fine. What has to move is the situation between the people in the room. Somebody knows something now they didn’t know before. Somebody’s decided something, even if they haven’t said it out loud. If you could swap the order of two scenes and nothing would feel wrong, that’s usually a sign neither of them is actually finished — they’re just event reports sitting next to each other.

What Beginners Get Wrong
The bit beginners get wrong most, in my experience, is over-explaining the ending. You write the moment, and then, because you’re not quite sure the reader caught it, you write another paragraph making sure they did. Try this: cut your last paragraph and see if the scene still works. Half the time it works better. The real ending was probably a line earlier than you thought.

There’s a rough test I use if I’m not sure. Read the last two lines with no context, like they’re on a fridge magnet. Do they sound like an ending, or do they sound like you just ran out of things to type? If it’s the second one, go back and find the moment the scene was actually heading toward, because it’s in there somewhere; you just wrote past it.

Doing too Much
The opposite problem is just as common, though — not stopping at all. You’ll know this one because the characters keep talking after the emotional point has already landed. They’re not talking because the scene needs it. They’re talking because you haven’t decided to let go yet.

Pay Attention
I don’t think there’s a particular formula for this beyond paying attention. But if you’re stuck between “is this scene done” and “should I keep going,” the honest question is usually: has anything changed yet? If the answer’s no, you’re not finished. If the answer’s yes, and you’re still writing, you’re probably padding, so trim and move on.

Do you struggle with knowing whether or not your scenes are finished?

As ever, thank you for stopping by!

Until next time,

George

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